7 Stars,
Dark clouds flowing by
the new moon beaming brightly,
Family and friends surrounding me
Smoke from fires lit,
smoked hangi,
moist and damp
Happiness,
pride in my culture,
peace and Love
respectful of matariki tradition
Salty and sweet,
creamy smoked air,
steam and tuna,
tasty dinner,
drink so juicy.
Beautiful singing,
wild wind,
7 sisters,
storms passing by,
tapping magic shoes.See more of Erina's poems here
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ReplyDeleteyour the best by desire well done erina strive to succeed and your be there.
ReplyDeletenice work, I like the worlds that you used.
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ReplyDeleteApii here, I am loving your Matariki Poem because the punctuation has been used correctly. It is the most beautiful peom and I think it is a wonderful way to explain what happens during Matariki celebrations
keep the good work up :)
erina good work on doing your poems well done hope you stel will write poems when you get older feel free from your best friend desire sanisirtou
ReplyDeleteGood work I liked the descriptive words you used.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Erina
ReplyDeleteThe adjectives you used in your poem created a strong sense of the atmosphere of your Matariki. Good on you.