Joan Tall, funny and cool Who feels happy to help people Who fears snakes, sharks, and big dogs Who needs money everyday to give to homeless people Who wonders what life is like in other countries Who would like to see dancing broccoli.
Hey Joan!I really like the way you described yourself really clearly and I also like how funny how you said you would like to see a dancing broccoli!LOL!
Hey joan I really liked the way you used structure in your bio poem and using positive and helping homless and the poor people who probably will have an good education when you help them survive because they might have no money or food to eat or no clean water.
Well done Joan! You have learned to write a Bio Poem using the structure and adjectives that describe you well.
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ReplyDeleteHey Joan!I really like the way you described yourself really clearly and I also like how funny how you said you would like to see a dancing broccoli!LOL!
ReplyDeleteKEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK!!!
Hey joan I really liked the way you used structure in your bio poem and using positive and helping homless and the poor people who probably will have an good education when you help them survive because they might have no money or food to eat or no clean water.
ReplyDeleteKEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Hey Joan
ReplyDeleteYou have a really unique bio poem. I like how you want to see dancing broccoli that would be fun to watch. Keep up the great work.