Room 10 Bright Sparks

Thursday, 13 June 2013

Lonely

In the park It’s busy on the see-saw,
Long and strong lifting
Children balancing.
Fulcrum still standing
Holding this simple machine.
At night, sitting there all cold, wet and lonely
Is the see-saw
Waiting for excited children to return.                                

By Lisiate
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2 comments:

  1. losana19 June 2013 at 12:12

    WOW!I really like the picture of your story and I also like the way your story and I also like the way that your story powerful word's in it!My name is Losana and I go to Tamaki Primary School!

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  2. Tame'e Kay27 June 2013 at 10:15

    Wow! That's a really understanding poem about the see-saw. It gives me a clear picture of how you feel on a see-saw.
    Keep up the good work Lisiate.

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