Room 10 Bright Sparks

Sunday, 18 May 2014

A War Poem - By Erina

Poem about World Wars.

Dark clouds coming by 
Red drops from the sky
Guns are heard from afar
We can see cars driving past
Really fast
They have lost their lives
Some of the family
Mostly wives
See poppies grow
On their graves
See them lay
On a beautiful day
Its too` sad to say good bye
A drop of tear from my eye.


  1. Well done Erina loved how you made the poem rhyme and interesting.Keep up the good work. :D

  2. Hi Glen brae i'm Ana fro tamaki primary school.
    I like the way you wrote something about war and i like the way the you made it rhyme.Keep Up the good work. :>